There are two main reasons why I want to become an Officer. First of all, I want to make a difference in the training of Reserve Soldiers. Second of all, I enjoy challenges, and becoming an Officer would be a new challenge that I would take with complete seriousness and would excel in.
I have been in the United States Army Reserves for almost ten years. During these ten years, I have become very proficient at my MOS, which is a 12N and I have been deployed to Iraq in 2003. Training soldiers is the job I enjoy the most.
Over the years, I have also had a chance to see and experience training and missions as an enlisted soldier. I remember all of the soldier complaints and mission complications. A great mentor once told me, the only way to ameliorate the headaches that come along with being a Reserve Soldier is to move up in the ranks. This is what I desire to do.
Honestly, I do not fully understand all the responsibilities of a Commissioned Officer. However, I do know that they are responsible for the majority of the planning. With my teaching background, my experience as an enlisted soldier, as a Noncommissioned Officer, and my experience with soldiers, I can make battle assemblies more worthwhile and meaningful to all soldiers alike.
I first handedly know what soldiers enjoy and I do have many great ideas that will without a doubt ensure high morale within any unit I am assigned to.
I absolutely love being in the United States Army and I live by the Army values. Learning new skills and being challenged are things that I take pleasure in. Becoming a Commissioned Officer would allow me to apply my knowledge and experience to the operations side of the Army. The Army will extremely benefit from my ambition and determination. Becoming a Commissioned Officer would be a challenge I would like to accept.
When I first enlisted, I did not know where my military career would take me. Back at that time, I thought that I may only complete my initial enlistment and move on to other professional pursuits.
However, over the past nine years, I have come to embrace all that the United States military stands for. I believe that service as an Army officer is a distinguished honor that is surrounded by a rich history of all who have served and sacrificed before me.
The first time I considered joining the military was shortly after September 11, 2001. I believe I’ve always had a strong sense of duty and purpose, but before 9/11, my mindset was individualistic and compartmentalized. The terrible events that occurred on that day demonstrated the need for dedicated men and women to serve our nation and protect against all enemies, both foreign and domestic.
I cannot think of a better place to serve our great nation than in the U.S. Army and I believe that, within the Army, the best way I can put all my resources to service is as an officer. I possess a diverse and comprehensive background of experience and training. General Douglas MacArthur once said, “A general is just as good as the troops under his command make him.” As a leader, I prefer to practice the principles of servant leadership in most situations.
A servant leader is someone who looks to the needs of the people and asks how they can help them to solve problems and promote personal development. They place their main focus on people because content and motivated people are able to reach their targets and to fulfill the set expectations. This has a direct connection to being an effective Army officer.
High-quality leadership is critical in order to accomplish the mission and succeed in motivating soldiers to perform at the peak of their personal ability level. It is important to avoid complacency and continually strive for excellence. If I am selected to become an officer in the United States Army, I will draw from my experience in the enlisted ranks when I lead and interact with soldiers under my command.
It is my personal goal to strive to become the best soldier I can be and utilize all professional advancement opportunities that are available to me. All officers are soldiers first and I will make it a priority to remember this and to live by the Army core values no matter where my career as an officer takes me.
The United States Army is one of the main factors that allows America to be a free and democratic country. The Army defends, protects, and honors the United States of America. Ever since I was a young boy, I saw greatness in the United States Army and hoped to one day be a part of it. I always envisioned myself in a leadership position and when I decided to join the Army, I knew being an officer was for me. To me, being an officer in the U.S. Army is a career unlike any other.
There are many opportunities as an officer in the Army to advance, further education, and grow as a person. The army allows you to switch your MOS and attend more training to further education or to change careers completely which is something…
I feel that I will be a great role model for my platoon because I am dedicated, hard-working, and relentless. Officers are responsible to lead and protect the people under them. They must have courage, strength, leadership, integrity, and respect. An officer in the Army needs to be able to think fast and make decisions for an entire platoon of soldiers.
Another important responsibility of an officer is to be able to make operation orders quickly and effectively. This is necessary to be able to complete the mission successfully and on time. I feel that although this is a difficult task for me right now, I am gaining a lot of experience writing them through officer candidate school and it something that I will continue to improve upon. An important part of being an officer is being able to give constructive evaluations of your soldiers so they can continue to improve themselves and help make the platoon better.
These evaluations are important to help each soldier understand what they are doing well and what they need to improve upon so they can further their career in the Army. I feel that I will excel at this because I am used to giving constructive feedback at my current and previous jobs. I also want to help my soldiers succeed so I feel that I will take the extra time to make their evaluations very specific. Another important part of being an officer is to handle the administrative work so that the platoon gets all…
The first time I considered joining the army I was a homeless teen who was also an undocumented immigrant in court proceedings trying to adjust my status. It was 2004 during my attendance at the Borough of Manhattan Community College; I would walk pass the recruiting station located on Chambers Street thinking to myself when I become a legal resident of the United States of America I am going to join the army. It was the most selfless act I could do for my family and the country that had allowed me to continue to be a member of its society.
Recently I have decided that I’d like to be an officer in the army because I would love to be able to help promote an environment that fosters good sound judgment, positivity, team building, and personnel interactions amongst our future soldiers.
I also desire to commission as an army officer because I believe that I have demonstrated my ability as a person who can lead, accept responsibilities, and adapt to an ever-changing organization and world. These are all positive traits and values that everyone should possess when serving one’s country as an officer.
Four years ago I joined the army because I wanted to show my appreciation to our great nation, today I would like the opportunity to do something even greater. I love serving my country; our country, but now the time has come where I feel as though leading from the front is something that I can be great at.
I’ve always believed that I had a strong sense of leadership skills, but being a Soldier has truly helped me realize what it means to be a true leader. Although I am currently a Specialist without any Soldiers my peers always look to me for guidance. It is my belief that all soldiers in the army are leaders and that in order for anyone to be a great officer they must also be able to follow directions. Being an enlisted Soldier there’s a great deal of knowledge that is learned through experience in order to gain leadership skills that an officer should poses.
To me being an officer also means that one must also be a great follower; being an enlisted Soldier for the last four years has had a positive impact even more so on that belief. When others hear me make this statement there’s always a reaction that seems to be negative, but I always remind them that officers are not born they are made; officers are made and shaped by the life and its many experiences. What makes a great officer is how he or she uses their experiences to become better leaders and how they apply that knowledge gained from their experiences to shape future leaders.
I’ve always believed that one must truly love doing what they do in life in order to be successful at it, be it cleaning the sewer or be it leading a nation. I love serving my country, but now I would love the opportunity to lead from the front. Life for me as a soldier and a civilian has been a lesson of great resilience and profound opportunities from being homeless to becoming a member of the greatest family of one in the world the United States Army. So when asked, “why is it I would like to become an officer in the army?” ultimately my answer is rather simple.
Why wouldn’t I want to be a member of an elite few, a member of the most valuable one percentile? Why would I not want to be a leading member of the greatest army, the greatest nation the world has ever seen, and will ever see? Most of all when asking this question to myself the answer ultimately leads to the irrefutable fact that I love to lead and one can only lead from the front.
I would love to be afforded the opportunity to be apart from the personnel that is responsible for making the decisions and implementing the plans and policies that guide all soldier personnel.
There’s no greater purpose in life than to serve one’s people, family, and country. I by no means feel that I have all of the answers, but I feel that I do have the drive for knowledge and the ability to make good decisions with authority and leadership. I do believe that it takes a great leader to pool the strengths of others and to that, I feel called. It is the by far the most selfless act anyone or I can do for the comfort of freedom.
The US Army is founded upon seven principles i.e. Personal Courage, Integrity, Honor, Selfless Service, Respect, Duty, and Loyalty. (US Army Manuals, 2008)Soldiers are taught about these values during training and they soon form part of their lives as they carry out their duties. Because I share the desire to acquire and live according to these values, then I believe that the US Army would be the right place for me.
In the civilian world, many people are familiar with all the latter values; however, very few of them actually embrace them as part of their lives. Most of them may consider these values as theoretical ones and rarely do they adhere to all of them. However, US Army officers are different in this regard. This is because the seven Army values are part of what they are.
All US Army officers are expected to bear allegiance to the Army, the US constitution, and to their fellow soldiers. Loyalty as an army value is first and foremost directed to the country and its heritage. In theory, this may seem like a relatively easy thing to do.
However, there is much that has to be considered in the execution of this value. For instance, when soldiers are out in combat and they are heading towards a location that they may not be sure of, it is essential for these officers to demonstrate their loyalty to the Army by obeying the directions of their Captain. This should be the case regardless of objections that other soldiers may have against the Captain’s opinion. (US Army, 2008)
In order to be loyal, it is necessary for one to actually bear witness to the US Army ideals. This normally means that one has to be willing to devote oneself to the Army and to other persons in the Army. This is usually displayed by a deep respect and support for one’s leaders and colleagues. Every Army soldier can contribute towards the greater good of the institution by carrying out their part.
There is only one thing that can prepare an individual to engage or participate in something that poses a serious risk of death. This is having great loyalty to one’s country. Such officers usually pledge allegiance to their country and their constitution even when it might cause them great harm or even loss of their lives. To me, there is nothing that can show one’s loyalty to their country like sacrificing one’s own life for it.
While it may be a fact that not all US Army officers are at risk of loss of life, one cannot ignore the fact that it can happen. Consequently, one ought to be ready for this.
On September 11th, 2001 a great disaster unfolded inside the United States. Terrorists had plucked a feather from the eagle of liberty but there was no way they were bringing this bird down. The price of freedom is eternal vigilance. However, I am committed to being eternally vigilant as an officer in the United States Army.
When the two towers fell, I was mad at them attacking our majestic country. I wanted to know why they hated us because of our freedoms and I almost dropped out of college to pursue exactly that course. The tragedy culminating on September 11th made me realize that freedom isn’t free. I think that all the troops deserve special thanks and praise for helping our nation be what it is today. I am thankful for my teachers for my ability to read and write. But I am thankful to the troops for my ability to do so in English.
On 9/11 the evil specter of international terrorism materialized on our shores and in the heartland of our great country. In a world in the midst of global terrorism, I think it is important that we have officers ready to serve on behalf of our country. As a result of the tragedy that befell us on September 11th, 2001 I would like to be in the army to help defend our freedoms.
I went to college for five years before I went to college I went to high school for four years. I was good at sports because I had the instincts of a cat, the muscle of a bull, and the heart of a lion. I think my experiences in life can carry me forward to peak performance in a career in the United States armed services.
Thank you for your time. I am confident that this board’s diligence to duty will lead to successful commissioning of me into the armed forces.
Example #7 – Interesting Ideas
The best bet would be to talk about your leadership capacity, national pride, and willingness to do whatever it takes to get the mission accomplished. I would look over some General’s memoirs and quote something from that as it relates to why you want to be an officer. The officer corps. loves military history.
there is not any rapid or basic way.. all require a minimum of a 4 3 hundred and sixty 5 days Bachelor’s degree and ALL are particularly aggressive to get into with determination expenditures commencing from 10-40%. in case you opt for rapid or basic, you have not have been given what it takes to make an effective chief. Leaders do not seem for shortcuts, loopholes, or the easy direction. in case you opt for something, you earn it. the not basic way.
Just write what you feel. Obviously you have reasons for doing what you are doing. Put that on paper. The brass don’t want a bunch of quotes from Generals and war heroes. They want to hear what you have to say. Start writing down your thoughts and rewrite, rewrite, rewrite. Have friends and family proofread it. Don’t be embarrassed, be genuine. You could place a quote or two in your essay to help make your point, but don’t write things down verbatim. You can do this, it’s not as hard as you may think. Best of luck, it will work out for you.
When I am asked why I want to dedicate myself to a life like this, so uncertain, I cannot answer. All the little reasons why never seem important enough to demonstrate my choice. I say that I want to help those in need, but that doesn’t seem significant enough. I could say that I know living a normal life isn’t the right choice for me. Maybe I could say that God set me on a mission.
As a citizen of the United States, I believe in the power of an American soldier. As a little girl in my pink dress and pigtails, my view was that an American soldier was a G.I Joe doll: male, extremely muscular, showing no fear. The only thing that mattered was their country; emotions were non-existent.
Going through high school, I had the honor of meeting many servicemen. My first encounter was with an active-duty Army soldier. He stood up in front of my history class and spoke of his recent tour. The ideas of fear, chaos, and strength were his topic. I remember sitting in class, amazed. His words engulfed my thoughts as I realized that this man was not a G.I. Joe doll. He wasn’t bulging with muscles. He wasn’t emotionless. He wasn’t even acting seriously. He was no military machine. He was human but more importantly, he was a hero.
This one person, this one day, this one class changed me. I was a girl who was overweight, unfocused and didn’t have much of a purpose. My plans were to become a nurse. Now, a year later, I am 15 pounds lighter, a lot stronger, and more determined than ever. I no longer have plans to be just a nurse; I have a goal to be an officer in the United States Army Nursing Corps. G.I Jane is not who I am looking to be. I want to be a real woman, working in both good and potentially dangerous conditions and situations, making a difference in the lives of others.